Pixar's pro tip for yesterday was "Rewrite, rewrite, rewrite."
I'm finding myself rewriting in places I wasn't expecting to. But all for the better. Just cleared up another bit of unnecessary dialogue, while refining other surrounding dialogue. A few minor segments of OH's previous script incarnation still remain, but have mostly been weeded out due to the fact the previous movie version's characters are somewhat different. Jon rightly pointed out, the past version of Adrian wasn't so much educated as innocent - as such, his responses to some of the following events were initially rather cold.
There was also some issues with rather jerky emotion flow and interactions between characters toward the end of scene 7, which have been fixed. I owe many thanks to Jon and Mike for helping me with these. C:
You get to see a moving segment of scene 7 today. Notes on the segment's production can be found in the comments. Enjoy!
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